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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-12-13 06:57 PM

“WITHIN SHADOWS GRACE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Moonbeams fall from depths of the sky,
dimly lighting the darkness of night,
faintly I see your silhouette in the mist,
dark is alive with flickers of candlelight…

Trees are dancing, singing in cool breezes,
your passions song told in gentle whispers,
never softer was your voice heard within,
my being calm with thoughts that tempers…

Enchanting the ways you are to charm,
luring my soul into your mystical web,
truly you are one within shadows grace,
as my heart flows with its gentle ebb…
~~~~

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2002-12-13 07:01 PM

An excellent title, Bill, and your poem compliments it very nicely

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-12-13 07:26 PM

(sigh) Oh Bill, this nis so lovely, sweet friend, I wish for moonbeams to always shine on your heart and for love to always grace you with a smile! (big hugggssssss) Yay, I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a ebautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

3 posted 2002-12-13 07:54 PM

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!

As always, you've stolen my heart again.

Hugs, Marti

Let our love circle the world and
bring Peace to all this Holiday Season.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-12-13 07:58 PM

Bill

Shadows are graceful, aren't they, especially when they linger in the corner of ones mind. Enjoyed!

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-12-13 08:03 PM

I enjoy all of your poetry, but this one seems especially beautiful. So many lines I like; this one is very pretty and descriptive:

.."dark is alive with flickers of candlelight..."

Thanks for your poems, they are a pleasure to read.

Warmest regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2002-12-14 04:37 PM

i like the whole seductive,enticement theme
of this lucky siren song

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-12-14 05:45 PM

you know this one caught my eye, and made me smile.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-12-14 06:34 PM

Wonderful Bill...simply enchanting.

~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-12-14 09:06 PM

nice

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

10 posted 2002-12-14 09:09 PM

Absolutely lovely and romantic!
enjoyed this much,
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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