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trixiegrrrl
New Member

since 2002-12-12

Posts 6
CA, USA

0 posted 2002-12-12 11:03 PM

~*~This was the very first poem I ever wrote and it was years and years ago but I thought to share it any way.~*~

-Cherish-
People always said life was hard to survive,
but I never really cared.
Then you came into my life and showed me,
what no one else had dared.
You gided me from my reality,
into yours so carefully.
Hand in hand we walked past my world,
into what seemed to be a fantasy.
Past a world of violence and despair,
where it is a harsh way to live.
Where every one is an ocean of "take,"
and a short shallow river of "give."
Past a world of sinful people,
and every step shows a broken heart.
Past a world where every longing soul,
just seems to want to part.
Into a world so safe and warm,
full of peace and love.
Where we could be together forever,
you're my gift from Heaven above.
And I will always cherish you,
and this world you've brought me to.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2002-12-13 12:10 PM

Isnt it profound to read things you've written long ago and find fresh new meaning within them that you never knew they possesed? :-)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-12-13 12:46 PM

Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this write, and glad that you had the sensibility to save and post it. I have a feeling you will really enjoy this site.

trixiegrrrl
New Member

since 2002-12-12

Posts 6
CA, USA

3 posted 2002-12-13 12:53 PM

Thanx guys! I'm Meagan btw but everyone calls me Trixie. Glad to be here

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-12-13 03:27 AM

Nice...James

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

5 posted 2002-12-13 04:06 AM

you don't meet too many cats that get to live in the nice place you're in...enjoy it.

wonderful.. liked the metaphors for give and take...

through the ravages of sleeplessness lies the comfort of the night

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