Open Poetry #23 |
When love walks away |
Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Tell me... What do you do when love walks away? How do you try and convince them to stay? What to do when the pain cuts this deep? When it hurts so bad that you can't sleep? I held my head in the air with pride. As a peace of my heart slowly died. Convince my self I didn't care. That my love was no longer there. What do you do when love walks away? How do you try and convince them to stay? What to do when the pain cuts this deep? When it hurts so bad that you can't sleep? I cried at night as my heart broke. Couldn't talk I always choked. My knees weak, my hand shaking. As my spirit was breaking. Tell me... What do you do when love walks away? How do you try and convince them to stay? What to do when the pain cuts this deep? When it hurts so bad that you can't sleep? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you keep looking for tomorrow...and one day you'll wake up and you'll realize it's okay |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done. Love needs no convincing... We heal for a reason... ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions, ALBERT. I don't have any good answers either. Guess you just sigh and be glad you recognized Love. |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I have only one idea If you hold to tight love will die If you want a chance to get the back open your arms and let them fly Watch them fly wait and see If they dont come back i t wasn't meant to be I really hate this advice but it is all the advice i have Take a good look at my face |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions Albert. Al I can say is to keep writing the hurt out. It does get easier with time. Very well done and I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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