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Communication Is Due
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Communication Is Due |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Communication Is Due I was left wondering When the fading began Having need for answers Please reply if you can All happens gradually As each day passes by My heart feels forsaken With need to know why As I beg and beseech Can my pleas be heard Torture is not knowing While waiting for word I hope to break silence By reaching out to you Write me your thoughts Communication is due Hope ©2002 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
touching plea without being overly emotional.. enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it never works with me, mine doesn't communicate until he's ready...good write! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Have been on this road...and had to ask..."What does your heart hear?" Great write. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very emotional poem, written from the heart, it sounds like.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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