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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-12-12 11:32 AM



Communication Is Due

I was left wondering
When the fading began
Having need for answers
Please reply if you can

All happens  gradually
As each day passes by
My heart feels forsaken  
With need to know why

As I beg and beseech
Can my pleas be heard
Torture is not knowing
While waiting for word

I hope to break silence
By reaching out to you
Write me your thoughts
Communication is due


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-12-12 11:42 AM


touching plea without being overly emotional..

enjoyed

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2002-12-12 12:44 PM


it never works with me, mine doesn't communicate until he's ready...good write!
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2002-12-12 12:46 PM


Have been on this road...and had to ask..."What does your heart hear?"
Great write. ThisDiamond

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-12-12 01:39 PM


Very emotional poem, written from the heart, it sounds like.    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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