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Grayed Matterhorn
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Grayed Matterhorn |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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A convoluted mess comfortably rests inside a grayed dome atop gentle slopes. Once ridged peaks hovering flat valleys below, perhaps still worth the visit. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-12-2002 10:29 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I definitely think so! Enjoyed a great deal.  Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling)... enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks Pat, Ron.  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You convinced me! I'll be there shortly. Hugs, Marti |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tomorrow I shall tell you the image I received today. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Mountains rise in youth soften in their time shed their craggy edges to a mellower clime warm and partly hidden to such lushness I am bidden |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
worth the visit everytime I come online and read your poems I think the very same  raph |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I toot my horn to your gray matter. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hehe, I had fun with this write. Thank everyone for reading and commenting. And Karilea? You no doubt caught the 'hidden' meaning correctly. LOL, sometimes subtle, sometimes not. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love these short ones! Yes! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Are stories and lore of our lives, still worth the visit, even though they have grayed around the edges, even though the binding is not as splendid as it once was? Ah, but for me, I prefer a leather-worn book. It means it has been read over and over and was interesting. It's an older book in pristine shape i don't trust (wink) Great stuff, Kacy. Jeff |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, I've got two great shadows here  Thanks for reading! Rider? so great to see you back on board.  |
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