Handle With Care-A Tanka (I hope)

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Open Poetry #23

Handle With Care-A Tanka (I hope)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-10-17 12:38 PM

Handle With Care
~ By Sue ~

Take this heart of mine
Handle it with so much care
Like a piece of glass
It has been broken often
Do not break it once again

10-16-02

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-10-17 12:42 PM

Sue,
A more than reasonable request. I hope it's a tanka too. Though I would have no clue!

Nice write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-10-17 12:45 PM

Sue, you did it---and such a moving one!

I shall hold you ever so carefully in the warm embrace of my friendship!

Linda

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-17 01:14 PM

(sigh) Oh Sue, I wish this for you with all my heart as you are so deserving of the most honest and magical love! (big hugggsssss) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!