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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
They only see their noses where the hummingbird reposes and the bumblebees are humming all day long. Where elves are having choices and making daffy noises and Santa clause rejoices in his songs. Where clouds are always sugared and noses aren't buggared and guns are never Lugered late at night. They delve on quacky numbers condemning all the somber until the pain is slumbered and made right. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
after seeing your reply, pardon me, for commenting [This message has been edited by Sandpiper (12-12-2002 08:16 PM).] |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Actually I was referring to the droning themes with the equally seemingly mindless droning replies which any poem elicits here whenever the intangibles of "love" "mother" "father" "cherish" "America" "freedom" "courage" "baby" and "I" are included in the right proportions. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Change the channel... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Mark is right of course. But, I'll play. Nicely, or they will censor me. ~I~ was wondering if now that you have raised yourself and your poem writing to a superior level, if your self-esteem has also risen. ~I~, one ~mother~, am glad you had the ~courage~ and sense of ~freedom~, to speak, a valued right in ~America~, insisted on by our fore~fathers~, so each newborn ~baby~ also has freedom of speech, we all ~love~ so much. I am a novice poetess. I am glad there is a place to post my attempts at poetry, to stroke my ego with other's droning drivel and uneducated opinions, in some instances. I love it! I need it! I use it! Positive, droning comments cause me to write better. I thrive on feed-back. I like being part of a like-minded group who openly accepts anyone who wishes to write and post their feeble and/or brilliant poetry. Shallowness and contempt are limited editions here, in this supportive family atmosphere. Please see my poem: "Can You Have Me? Just Touch My Mind!" and know that on this site there is a maximum of (?) 10-15... maybe, master poets, who can do it with their poetry. I could not afford to buy their poetry, and feel guilty reading it for free. But, I can study it, I can ask the poet questions about it, and become a better poetess with these resources at hand. What do you have to offer? Just so you know, I have sold a lot of my poetry, not to poets, but, to the general public. So the sappy stuff you find droning, the common layman is willing to pay for. And, that is the best compliment anyone can recieve. And, the best feeling to have touched someone. Where was your mind when you wrote your reply? Have you read Tim's elf poems.....they are award winning! I am glad for this site. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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