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Open Poetry #23

Peters request to Wendy

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2002-10-17 12:35 PM

I look inside myself
and realize
that I am not the Boy
I was when we first met
But a man by right
for I have grown from my internal fight

the years have passed
and our love still last
though its light has faded
it still is easily kindled by the past

Memories of laughter and games
of kisses and erotic flames
that has burned into our emotions
loves true devotion

You have changed from the girl next door
to a woman that I truly adore
So as I kneel before you now
I ask out loud
will you take my hand
and leave with me to never never land

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (10-17-2002 02:13 PM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-10-17 12:45 PM

Thomas,
Awesome write. Glad you are here at Passions! This is truly a fine piece.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-11-21 02:45 PM

Um, are you sure you are ready
to put away your toys?

Interesting write...
not many men will acknowledge
they still harbor Peter inside...that
in itself is a sign of growth!

Thanks for the read...looking forward to more.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-21-2002 02:46 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-21 03:01 PM

Thomas, I really like the love story in this fine poem....and not just because I'm a hopeless romantic, either. It really has a good message to it.

It kind of reminded me of my parents. They still act like a couple of teenagers sometimes.

I pray that my Gary and I still feel like this when we've been together for many years. I do believe that we will.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-21-2002 03:26 PM).]

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2002-11-21 08:14 PM

Thomas, many years ago I took an oath never to grow up...I've kept that vow...seems as if you did too??

...believe what your heart feels...

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