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Burnt Toast
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Burnt Toast |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Spittin venom stings my palette. Biting bullets bleeds my tongue. Hearts on fire burn every day. Maybe a good time to turn away? I've had enough burnt toast, thank you. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Oh! Love this--and yep, even when you scrape off the burn that toast still doesn't taste the same--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
interesting compilation - will have to think on this some more. thanks for the early morning brain-teaser.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hmmm... minimalistic in a way that one could see the several things out of it.. harsh words spit.. one keeping their pain and anger under control.. liked this... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I know how that can feel! "I've had enough burnt toast", as well! ~ May your life's mana be more palatable! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun You know some people like burnt toast. LOL Enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, enjoyed it |
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