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Icy Fingers
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Icy Fingers |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Icy Fingers  The touch was warm at last recall, arms that branched and held me tight. But now I sit in shades of dark in chill of ice, alone this night. These frozen thoughts need thawing out, the raw of me in need of you. I'll watch come morn, for sun to rise and melt the ice that frosts my view. I wait my time, for your return. This longing holds 'til you are here. Your passion warms my inner soul and melts the ice when you are near. Icy fingers that memory press tomorrow's warmth in your caress. M * picture courtesy of Mickie "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-11-2002 07:18 PM).] |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
if you were the branch, i'll be one reaching out in the morning to give you warmth. Beautiful M bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
maureen - icy, yet warm with your touch... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very warm, though it is "icy"  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Like all of your work, Maureen, wonderfully, skillfully penned. Take care and an early Merry Christmas to you.  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you could almost hear the trees crying in this......very beutiful, i wonder how they stand thru the seasons, year after year with such grace |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Sounds very good too me. Very nice piece. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very sad touch |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Nice images--beautifully written bittersweet--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I love the picture. And the poem is beautiful. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Such a warm poem wrapped around a cold picture. Great job of writing. alan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Alan, are you really right next door...I peeked through the window and didn't see you there  thanks.Thank you Sue, I borrowed the picture from another although my trees looked like that too. bslicker, that is a beautiful phrase..and in a way it is a poem all by itself. Thank You. BC...I am trying to keep warm in thought *s thank you Ethel, yes, there are times when the cold outside brings the warmth from inside of me into words. Michael, I appreciate your kind words and hope all is well. I hadn't seen your name lately on here. Have a wonderful holiday season. inkedgoddess, some of the trees will lose their branches and others will gain strength. fishop, thank you *s passing shadows, actually it may sound longing..but it isn't sad...none of my poems are really sad..just moody..or thoughtful and are on the borderline of happiness. I am waiting to cross that line. Sandpiper , thank you *s Do you know what..your quote is exactly what happened to me 5 years ago..."Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." Pablo Neruda |
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