Open Poetry #23 |
I Love You Dad |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * Christmas time is not the same Because you are no longer here I don't feel the need to celebrate And more often I shed a tear I take flowers to your grave Where I spend a moment or two It's the place where I come To be closer to you 'tho you're not really here I feel at peace in this place Where the birds sing so sweetly As the tears stain my face I never have much to say Except 'I love you Dad' My memories I'll always cherish So many treasured times we had I remove the old dead flowers And replace them with the new As I remember with much fondness How much I still love you I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (12-11-2002 08:41 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'm sure he knows..and sure he feels the love... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
he does indeed know. how special this is, to remember him this way, and to be able to put it in to such touching personal words. my thoughts are with you. lots of love gemma xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: very tender and caring poem. Your dad is proud of you, I'm sure and knows how you feel! Betty Lou Hebert |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful poem, gorgeous picture...in a week or so it will be my Dad's Birthday...and I don't think I will ever get over his loss. hugss Sue, M * ps where did you find that picture, I love it |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awwww...Sue, what a touching poem. I'm sorry that Christmas is still so hard for you. You are in my thoughts, Hugs, Marti |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I understand how hard it can be to endure the holidays with a loss so dear but know your dad will always love you and never forget you and is always guiding you with love and he is why the sun shines and flowers bloom! (sigh) I send many angel hugs of comfort your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I'm so sorry that you're sad. I'm glad that you have good memories, though. "Love makes the world go around" |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Very nice poem. Sorry for your loss. Wow on the pic. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sue, this is one of the most tender poems I have read in quite some time....I believe it should have another spot at the top, as there are many of us who share these feelings. ~~S~~ Pen how you truly feel... |
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