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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-12-11 02:12 PM



You lifted me up
when I was down.
You made me smile
when I wanted to frown.
You helped me speak softly
when I wanted to scream.
But when I screamed,
you listened.
When I needed to cry
your shoulder was there.
You are gone now,
but today I think
I felt your shoulder.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-11-2002 02:14 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-11 02:16 PM


Then this one indeed is not gone, but instead just letting you grow, still there to lean on when you need it...

enjoyed the read


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2 posted 2002-12-11 02:16 PM




(sigh) Oh Kacy, this is lovely, sweet friend, and I hope you always feel that shoulder as that is everything we need to stand up straight with that faithful smile! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-11-2002 02:17 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-12-11 02:17 PM




-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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4 posted 2002-12-11 02:21 PM


Thank you, Ron, Noah, Mark.
I'm missing a friend today. Sometimes we just have to make do with a memory.

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5 posted 2002-12-11 02:22 PM


a true friend ...a loved one such as this seem to have away of sending those vibrations that let you know...You are never alone.


Nicely Done

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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6 posted 2002-12-11 02:26 PM


Thanks Salty. And that quote is good, Deepak is deep.
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7 posted 2002-12-11 02:36 PM


nice
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8 posted 2002-12-11 02:58 PM



someone who touched your life, is always there, sadly not physically, at times,
but reminders do have a way of sneaking up at times

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9 posted 2002-12-11 04:16 PM


Touching poem midnite, the shoulder will always be there for you as long as you remember and love.


raph

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10 posted 2002-12-11 05:01 PM


enjoy your read
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11 posted 2002-12-11 05:19 PM




Kacy, This is very, very nice.
Loved the sentiment. A friend
forever, even though no longer
around. Yes!


Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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12 posted 2002-12-13 03:05 AM


Enjoyed...James
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13 posted 2002-12-13 07:18 AM


Someone who makes us feel like this is precious indeed. Even if it’s not forever, the memory is.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

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