Open Poetry #23 |
touch of love |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
something made me look up, this ordinary day of winter grey and motionless skies, hynotic in its emptiness, this fog now lifted by your sudden caress, when i felt you enter as the bird fluttered by, shattering the cold and the loneliness and i wonder if you felt me too, felt my love, entering you? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful and deeply spiritual. (if I understood it correctly) Thanks Inked raph |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
such feelings are to be remembered...and rare indeed enjoyed the read.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful poem, filled with feelings and emotions. Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank s for the nice thoughts, aenimal.........yes, spiritual, but not in a religious sense |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Sooooo nice, to feel another even when they aren't there, you describe it beautifully--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Simply lovely. Sunkissed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - your writings are touching, filled with softness, caressing, and words from within... BC |
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cmslaton New Member
since 2002-12-11
Posts 4Georgia, USA |
Beautiful poem. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a romantic thought, and warming too. |
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