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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2002-10-17 08:13 AM


Choka 13

Thoughtful elation,
Endless semblance emotion,
Rolling thought again
Musings deep inside my brain,
Because of moonshine
Or some coins perchance to find,
Stars on horizon,
Or watching the goldfish swim.
Where the mind wanders
Thoughtful elation ponders
The nature of things,
Then reality’s rush brings
Swift end to my pondering.

Gloom


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Sandpiper
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1 posted 2002-10-17 08:36 AM


I go there often! Enjoyed.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-10-17 08:43 AM


Professor,
Enjoyed, but you can ponder reality.

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-10-17 08:47 AM


I saw a sign on this wall of a grocery store that was right next to a bar..on the grocery store it read: NO LOITERING....on the wall of the bar it said: NO PONDERING....good write Gloom
Professor Gloom
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4 posted 2002-10-17 09:27 AM


Thank you, Sandpiper,
Pleased you enjoyed,
I might spend too much time there.

Thank you, Seymour Tabin
Glad you liked it, Reality can be pondered,
But in this case, Reality stopped the ponder

Thank you, Toerag,
Must be the differences of bars,
I was pondering in one just last night,
They don’t mind as long as you drink while pondering.

Gloom

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2002-10-17 09:59 AM


Oh, how I love to ponder. You've captured the fleeting moments when the thoughts settle in, beautifully Professor Gloom. Very much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-10-17 11:08 AM


when I ponder..it doesn't help....

M

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7 posted 2002-10-17 11:08 AM


Professor Gloom, I liked hearing you ponder. thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

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8 posted 2002-11-21 11:49 AM



Elation
comes in all forms...

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2002-11-21 11:51 AM


geez...I've been doing the pondering thing all morning around here.....
you wrote it much better than I could have.  Well done.

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