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Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

0 posted 2002-12-10 04:59 PM

Just for a moment
                     think
           of time
and our little span
           of existence
           of being
           of humanity
Be all warm inside
And try to break in a fuss

Just meditate
                    smile
           with attraction
for curly compassion
           with sight
           with body
           with toys
Somewhat delight/no cloud
Some say art is clear vision

etoodog

[This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (12-10-2002 05:01 PM).]

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2002-12-10 05:12 PM

I don't know if art is clear vision, but I like this poem. I like the construction and the feeling.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-12-10 05:24 PM

Robert,
Well done, ejoyed the read.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-12-10 05:28 PM

Ah, some easy thinking
allows many roads to
be taken with this
delightful piece...
thank you, Robert!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-12-10 08:44 PM

Well done Robert. Enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-12-10 08:47 PM

Delightful Robert!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2002-12-10 09:22 PM

is art a clear vision, or is a clear vision
art in itself?
intersting........

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

7 posted 2002-12-10 10:52 PM

Robert

A thinking poem...simple, yet complex. Enjoyed!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

8 posted 2002-12-11 01:22 AM

Sitting crosslegged and quiet
I free myself
from all by the art
of life.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2002-12-11 02:22 AM

makes me sit back and sigh

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-12-11 03:55 AM

Enjoyed...James

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