Open Poetry #23 |
Forever December |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“FOREVER DECEMBER” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I’ve seen seasons change every year, felt the winds blow cold in autumn, know of leaves falling from trees, touching of winter, as it will become… I dream of your eyes searching mine, feeling silk touching onto my face, knowing of fingers gentle upon me, touching of lips soft with grace… I know of and feel all these things, to know of you I would remember, perhaps you would know of desires, once we meet, in forever December… ~~~~ Title inspired by someone very special, a very good friend... [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (12-09-2002 08:37 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill---Again, another beautiful love poem! I like the title and the way you used it in the last line. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I love this Definitely brought a smile to my face. It brought me to a crisp cold autumn, outside, waiting for soemone I loved. Keep it up. Always, GG - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill...this is really one of the most beautiful pieces I have read of yours. Amazing...simply amazing. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, I love this, too. It is very special. Worth re-reading over and over. It is wonderful, warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if this was forever october, i would swear you read my mind......and took a page out of my life very beautiful |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I just love this just as I love the winters purity so much! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! How romantic! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bill: One of my all time favorites here! Great write. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AAAWWW, what beautiful words to your "friend", dear friend...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Inspiration is always in your pen. Thank you. etoodog |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very inspiring poem Mr. Charles..... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ When cold the winds of December blow I would wish with all my heart That they carry a warming message to hold you while we're apart~ Forever is a long, long time to hold your memory ... Yet I shall cherish the all of you until you are back with me~ *Well ... inspire begets inspire~ Melodious swell of your heart-thoughts, my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh Bill! this reaches out to my heart in such a gentle way. forever is to long to stay so I promise - just for today in my heart I will always remember as you paint me forever December. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now Bill, if it were Forever December, we'd go bust buying all those presents and watching time rust... besides I'd then be forever older every day so let December pass along and others have their play! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bill another fine love poem from the pen of a great romantic....well done again my friend! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love the title...excellent writing...James |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I know this, now. For it is the state of my current mind. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful Bill As Always M |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I just found this....and really enjoyed it. Such a delicate write. Forever December...charming words. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, now, you know I love this one!! Wonderful write Bill. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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