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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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I'm waiting for the fall of eve the darkness, full and thick upon the surroundings, peaceful, quiet, in the absence of you. I wait for the dense air of night black of all that is the remove of noise, to miss, you, in the mid of thought. You my love, who touched... who left me with a kiss, on lips, heat on fingertips, my passion now alive... missing you, and I am awash with the warm of Christmas yet undone in the lack of you. WhiteRose 12/09/02 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I like this... the tone and feel is somber yet in a way hopeful... may they always only be temporary absences..that do indeed make the heart grow fonder... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have been missing you and your poetry! Meanwhile, it appears you have been doing some missing of your own!--which you have expressed so poignantly--and well! ~ Sending you lots of pink loving light and angel hugs EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I too, miss your poetry. This is great, though feels sad. Absence is very hard some times. Hope soon, you'll be together. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Ron for reading and responding. Linda, I've been busy with the hubby home. It's so nice to be missed.  Pat, thanks so much. As I said, it is nice to be missed. You are too kind. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
..the puzzle just isn't complete without all the pieces--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Anne it is so good to see your words again. A very wonderful write full of emotions. Hugs girlie. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A full and shimmering presentation dear Poetess. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne this is a beautiful poem, but kind of sad, with the ache of missing someone you love. I know the feeling very well. By the way, I've been missing your words here at PIP. glad to see them again... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-10-2002 12:21 PM).] |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
You wrote this with such a caring tone. Could feel your pain, but with such a soft voice that it leaves you hopeful. Nicely done! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Sandpiper, thank you so much for reading and responding.  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Donna, Thanks so much. Your comments mean a lot to me. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
TD, thank you dear, glad you enjoyed  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Ethel, Thanks so much dear friend. I've been so busy with the hubby home. Now that he's gone again, I'd give anything to be too busy to be here. If ya know what I mean |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Salty, Thanks so much for reading and responding. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So much longing in this... it's great to read you again Ms Rose  Maree. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
an achingly yearning poem, that is seamless in its construction Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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