Open Poetry #23 |
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The Trap |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
The Trap! Riding the wave of accomplishment, mists of excellence sparkle omnipotence, ah, you are the sun! . . . . . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-13-2002 03:23 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No, I'm Sun...you be regards...LOL...a lot can be said in a few words...I like the way you write! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
...with a little bit of shine... thanks for your reply sunshine, I appreciate your comments, and your sense of humor. ![]() Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Well then, shine on ! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Are you a Leo? Sounds like it! As they say, it takes one to know one! haha EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I revised this from "I" to "you". Nice to see your sense of humor. I originally was going to use ~the wind~ but, can you imagine if Toerag got hold of it..... Big Smiles to all of you who replied...Maybe it has an apt title. ...may we all shine on.... God Bless ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
regards~ I'm liking this piece very much. You've said much in just a few words. Very nicely done. ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Vicky, Thanks for the post. Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Of mice from men...It's a trap...I hear the snap..it's to late...should not hesitate..pass the cheese...please...snap.. Good write gal |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
regards, I could see what Toe might say if you'd used wind and he still may if you make the opportunity. I enjoyed the shine of sun. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kethry, I enjoyed the shine, too. She is so bright, isn't she? And no way am I giving Toe an opportunity such as that. Look what he's done with the title alone. He needs no help from me. Actually, I adore hit wit! Warmly, Pat ![]() I only wrote this poem for too often I fall into the state of arrogance, when all of life is going exceedingly well...I can lose humility and a sense of God faster than Toe can write a funny poem.. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, this is a very well written poem. I love the way you wrote it in just a few words. Thank you for sharing, Pat. Oh, I'm just gonna leave that about Mr. Toe alone. HaHa!! With Love, Ethel |
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