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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-09 01:00 PM


Walls that I have built,
crumble like sand castles
beneath a wave
And I am submersed
within the deep blue calm
of your embrace

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-09-2002 02:22 PM).]

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2002-12-09 02:48 PM


send me one of those waves, huh?
MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
2 posted 2002-12-09 08:15 PM


Luckily, your walls were made of sand...  Sounds like a nice embrace.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
3 posted 2002-12-09 08:26 PM


Will do passing shadows, ...um as soon as i find one for myself

Thanks Mark loves embrace is what its all about

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2002-12-09 08:29 PM


sand castles being washed away are sad i feel, but the loving embrace is nice to fall into
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
5 posted 2002-12-09 10:36 PM


Inked that embrace is the only thing really worth living for may we all find it. Thanks for the constant support


raph

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