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rm711
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2002-12-09 12:40 PM



I hope I never let you down

I’ll give you all I can
All there is in me
So that I can make you see
You’re everything to me

You’re there when I cry
And when it hurts so badly
You take it away
And make me laugh again

I wish I could take away
Whenever you feel low
Cause it hurts me more
To see you suffer and in pain

I just want to be to you
All that you are to me
The best friend I could ever see
And you never judged my mistakes

When you see bad in me
I cry and feel let down
And this is the worst feeling of hurt
Because I look up to you as a father
And as a brother
And for everything you are

Its gonna be the hardest thing
To let you go
And I will be very lost
And always wish you were here
By my side

I won’t forget your words
Your jokes and all the silly little things you do
I’ll be here waiting for you to come back
And the day you do
I’ll cry because
That’s what you mean to me
And what I want to mean to you

My best friend
My guidance
My favourite person in all the world
My brother

It’s for you
Matthew.

Rosie Mitchell

© Copyright 2002 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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1 posted 2002-12-09 02:49 PM


I wish I could feel that way about mine...but he's a jerk. You're lucky...nice tribute here.
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
2 posted 2002-12-09 07:24 PM




Wonderful, wonderful tribute.
My son's name is Matthew....

know what it means?

~Gift of the Lord~

Though he rarely acts that way. Tsk!
But, when he does, wow...what a son.

I liked this. You are blessed and so is he to have such a grateful brother.

Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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