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Maiden Sighs
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Maiden Sighs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Maiden Sighs A cry when heard makes Randy fly Gathering up all maiden sighs Collected by his web of hues Insignias they can’t refuse. Sprinkling star dust o’er the field Raking in the cries of yield Painting castles for their stare Providing Knights in searching fair. Dreams of wish with but a touch With simple rules of such and such A flight into an ecstasy With nothing said of agony. Quick silver is the brightest bright Salubrious in veiled delight A dance around the cactus tree With each of them in practice free And some will hold his hand in friend And some will brand a salty end. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Top of the morning to you, Mr. T.! Can you and Randy hear my maiden sighs? EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A cry when heard makes Randy fly Gathering up all maiden sighs Collected by his web of hues Insignias they can't refuse. Sprinkling star dust o'er the field Raking in the cries of yield ================================ Quick silver is the brightest bright Salubrious in veiled delight A dance around the cactus tree With each of them in practice free And some will hold his hand in friend And some will brand a salty end. ===================================== I'll hold anything Randy askes me to! LOL  He already knows all my sighs and winkies are just for you two.  *ww*   just one line ... one rhyme ... one metered verse ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh *Sigh* Sy... Please head Randy up north and I'll hop on for a ride. Lovely morning read with my tea.. ~morning hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel If your sighing he's flying. LOL JM, I think Randy made a special case of you. It's the first time I have seem him smitten. WWRS Enchantress Just sigh a sigh and he will fly. LOL Have a good one. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, You are gathering lots of maidens with this poem. Maybe put a santa hat on him and a sleigh for room for all... Liked this imaginary flight. Fun to read. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice poem, Seymour! I always enjoy reading your poems. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Randy guy is such a flirt I know would rescue every skirt I've heard him listening at my door for sigh that signals evermore Excuse the silly rhyme...Loved your Randy poem!  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Randy sounds like such a delight And now he's even taking a flight To gather up all the maidens fair If we sigh just right, he'll be right there [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-09-2002 11:05 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and lo he heard the maiden cry, drew up sword, and softly sighed... This is  liking this a WHOLE lot... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Santa hat is a good idea, he just bought one. LOL SmartChick Glad you enjoyed. Martie Enjoyed your rhyme. garysgirl Thanks for the cute rhyme, enjoyed. Sunshine, So glad you liked. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I loved it from the title to the very last words. As I'd said before your words bring to mind romances of old with the same skill and grace. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
such a chivalry sounding verse....Absolutely love it! btw Salty ends might not be all bad  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal A lovely reply, thank you. Salty Well there is salty and salty, LOL Thank you for the read and reply. |
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Computer Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 10Norfolk, NE |
This is awesome. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now just look at you! Randy has all the girls swooning here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Computer Vewry kind of you. Sharon, Not all of them. LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this is bound to make any maiden sigh, I love this, good day to you, kind sir, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
'tis a "maiden magnet" for sure you've created--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol at Sandpipers maiden magnet. A delightful read this morning Sey. Morning hugs to you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sy You haven't lost your touch and you can still sneak in the odd..."Salubrious" Nicely done my friend! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, very salubrious now if you can just get rid of the salted slugs, the world will be wonderful. BTW where are my etchings. You promised you would show me your etchings and you didn't.  Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry Sorry darling I thought I had sent them. Will do post haste. Thanks for the read. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
does randy do New Jersey? theres a set of twins, that would like to meet him...... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Randy loves twins. LOL Thanks for the read. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I hear more sighs from you, and they are delightful. Liz |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - remarkable write, very nicely done... BC |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Might as well head for NE too! We'd love to have the company. Just make sure you bring your mittens, hats and galoshes. Snow expected tomorrow. Hugs and Cheer ... Marti 'A witty saying proves nothing.' |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Yes Randy does sigh, thank you. Bill, Thanks for the stop by and reply. Marti, Got all the heavy stuff. LOL |
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