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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-12-08 05:59 PM


I Count The Days
~ By Sue ~

Each day that goes by
Is just one more day closer
To the dreams I have

I do count the days
To be able to leave here
For a life brand new

To be by myself
After all these years with you
Looks real good to me

It may take some time
To forget all I went through
When I was with you

Those days will lessen
As the time does go on by
With no thoughts of you

And maybe some day
I will feel some forgiveness
In my heart again

11-27-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-12-08 06:55 PM


That day will come Sue *s
hugs
M

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-12-08 07:00 PM


You're doing great Sue!
Keep up the good work!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

vandana
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3 posted 2002-12-08 08:57 PM


enjoy your read
garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-12-08 11:26 PM


Sue, a beautiful poem from a beautiful person. Thanks for sharing...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-12-09 12:32 PM


Very nice...James
passing shadows
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6 posted 2002-12-10 03:50 AM


I pray some day soon
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