Open Poetry #23 |
If When In Autumn (inspired by Enchantress) |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“If When In Autumn” by Bill Charles ~~~~ If when The trees sway and sing, and breezes caress speaking your name, inside me flows deeper than before, I feel your warmth, see white clouds in the sky and swallow the breath of you… If when the cold of winter stalks, takes me into its self, I know of you as you touch, my lips melt with the burning fires of yours, willows sway to and fro calling near the stream… If when a loving dove flies with your tenderness placing it in my heart as it sang of you, it flows into my thoughts… And when the trees shiver as their blanket falls, and the silence beckons without birds song, I whisper of times ago when we met, the closeness of two, and I shall always love you until the end of time… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and I know Nancy will too, yay, I wish this timeless love to always breath in your heart like a harvest, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
A most lovely response to her poem..delightful! aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful Bill... What a lovely and romantic response! Thank you so much...fantastic write! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, you sure know how to respond to a lady! Nice reply to Enchantress ... Hugs, Marti |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I enjoyed this much, so nicely written. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Lovely, just lovely. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful!!! |
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