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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Tsk! I could go out and do it you know, but, why risk ruining such a wonderful fantasy! ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Why indeed, except maybe to experience life, I like the brevity in this. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is good...I like it...made me grin... and the first word, if you call "Tsk" a word, surely does capture the eye of one's audience....almost a challenge to read the poem... Well done... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kethry, you are right of course, however, with age comes wisdom and some fantasties are best if left alone. Thanks for the comments. Appreciated greatly. Warmly, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Magnus, thank you. I was grinning when I wrote it. It is meant to be light -hearted. I don't call ~tsk~ a word but it did do what was intended, at least in your case. Thank you so much for taking the time to reply. I am glad you like it. Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Patricia, I just love this, sweet friend, this is so very true and I love how you used the word as you were like, "Awwwwww, thank you, but I'd rather not waste the fantasy!" in a friendly way! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
regards2you - why risk it is right... Nice.. BC |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sometimes the risk is just daring to dream the fanatasy. Nicely written. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
tsk!---I bet this cute poem reflects a cute you! EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is cool! I know what ya mean! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thanks Dixie, at one point in time I did explore some fantasties..... I found more often than not, the fantasy forgot to allow for the dynamics in the 'real deal'. Not always....though.... sometimes we do have to risk our vulnerability and trust what we feel. Sometimes, that does turn out well.But, I did write this light-heartedly, meaning it to amuse.... Thanks, Hugs to You, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Thanks for the smile The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, this is really cute. I enjoyed it. It did bring a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing with us. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some fantasties are best if left alone... now that is a line a I agree with .  M |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
That sums up a lot of things. You said quite a bit in so few words! Much love, ~Krissie "No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Absolutely! Thank you. etoodog |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed the read Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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