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Once but yet
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Once, in a moment of quiet Life portrayed a perfect realm With hopes and dreams cascading Amongst belief with arms extended But, then the shadows came denying Crashing through in thunder's cadence Rain dashing away the map A course realization of loss Yet, amidst the ashen splendor With wind swirling in the death A life began much stronger I find myself again |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yet, amidst the ashen splendor With wind swirling in the death A life began much stronger I find myself again I felt when reading this like you have been peeking into my own life at times. I really related to these words. They say so very much. Hugs and peace to you. I know that you can 'read' me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This deeply touched my heart, sweet friend, it's like where there is darkness comes light, and even in the ashes something exists, even if intangible, a faith that endures all smoke! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort your way, this is very well-written, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful words of hope. Thank you for sharing them with us. |
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