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Walking Away
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Walking Away |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I know It hurts When you see someone Is walking away And you know How It feels When you see someone Walking away from you Walking away Is hardest thing You ever saw or felt It In your heart you know There Is a feeling for love And you never thought That It will hurt you When you see someone Is walking away from you I know you want to cry And you tried hard enough Not to stay long But It hurts you When you see someone walking away from you You want to be strong So that your heart doesn't feel hurt By someone Who doesn't have a heart To show How It feels you and give away your heart to someone When someone already Is walking away from your life And you know It Is hard to fall In love and It's hard to call their name In your heart To see someone whom you love Is walking away Without saying a word to you It's hard to feel That love has to end When someone Is already Walking away [This message has been edited by vandana (12-08-2002 08:59 PM).] |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Very interesting. Has a strong sense of thought to this. Makes you think about lost loves, Well at least I do. Very Beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Poetry is love and love is life. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, it is hard to feel that love has to end. You expressed that in your poem, and may all find acceptance, courage and peace. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (12-07-2002 10:53 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Vandana, I could see this one vividly. That walking away moment stays with you forever. Enjoyed. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I know this well. I hope you are not experiencing this right now....hugs!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vandanna it surely is hard to watch someone walk away. Sometimes we know that they are walking away for the right reasons and even then it is hard. I felt this one deeply. Well done. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh Vandana, this is such a heartaching feeling, sweet friend, I know his feeling all too well and it takes a lot of courage to believe when one does turn away it is only for the best of both! (sad sigh) I hope this doesn't relate to your current conditions, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, a picture that never fades from memory, I know. |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
I know how it feels to have to walk away!I walked away from my true love(we're together now)and I also had to walk away from the hospital without my dad.But your poem was terrific.Hope to read some more! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandanna, this is a very good poem with lots of feeling in it. I enjoyed it very much. :hjeart: "Love makes the world go around" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know it...James |
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