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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2002-12-07 09:42 AM

The geese left today
for warmer waters
and my heart flew with them
in anticipation
of you.

Why is it
the sun shines today
for everyone but me?
Why is it
the clouds follow me
with darkness and gloom?

The geese left today.
I chose to stay.
After all, this weather
can't last forever.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-12-07 10:24 AM

Midnitesun
True and I enjoyed the read.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-12-07 10:28 AM

Beautiful.
The geese always return my friend. As we become more seasoned, we share this truth.

ThisDiamond

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-12-07 10:30 AM

So true and something for us to remember in the winter of life.

Enjoyed much.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-12-07 11:03 AM

Sy, Diamond, Pat: Thanks for hanging in here with me. I'm sure it will be sunny tomorrow. If not, well, eventually.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-12-07 11:05 AM

The geese left today
for warmer waters
and my heart flew with them
in anticipation
of you
====================

love this analogy and imagery Kacy...
a bittersweet beauty here.
We all seem to be trying to hold back winter this year. Im still at the beach

just one line ... one rhyme ... one metered verse ...
if only I could inspire in you ... promised poetic coerce.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-12-07 11:24 AM

JM, then let's go build a sand castle!
Thanks for the sunny smile.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-12-07 12:53 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Yes, it reminds me of that advice where if you're lost, you should just stay where you are as someone is looking for you and if you go on looking you only get yourself more lost! (kiss on cheek) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2002-12-07 06:29 PM

I'm in for the sand castles!!! Meet ya in Margaritaville.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2002-12-07 07:04 PM

Noah, thanks for reading. But then, you always read my stuff!

Duncan, great idea! I'll bring the bucket and shovel (or straw) if you bring the Cuervo gold.

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

10 posted 2002-12-07 10:28 PM

Kacy, a good goose is always worth a gander...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2002-12-07 10:44 PM

I hope tomorrow is a whole lot better for you. They say "nothing lasts forever". But, I hope tomorrow is a much better day for you, and it lasts for an eternity.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-12-07 10:49 PM

MVS, how true. Whither shall I wander?

Smart Chickadee, yes, it will be OK, so will I.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2002-12-08 03:36 AM

Kacy, a very beautiful poem, with much feelings. Thank you for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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