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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-12-07 08:12 AM




One Patiently Waits

No idea where to start
Had I left it too long
Heart once flowed
Where did I go wrong

It seemed easier then
Knowing what to say
I remembered when
Words flowed each day

How could I describe
If hanging between
I can be plain to see
Yet my feelings unseen

The awkward pauses
Nothing translates
My days will come
As one patiently waits

If being transparent
By means of light
Return me the shine
Giving reason to write


Hope ©2002

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-12-07 08:45 AM


HopeS
Well done and you write because you have something to say.

regards2you
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2 posted 2002-12-07 11:32 AM




Yes, you do and I heard it.
Enjoyed the honesty and can
relate.
Hugs to you and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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3 posted 2002-12-07 12:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yay! Yes, say what you say for your golden heart is always speaking and saying what you feel is the true virtue of life! (kiss on cheek) This is special, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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