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My Forevermore
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My Forevermore |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Forevermore In another time and place When I was prime to run the race When everything was in my fetch And nothing that I could not catch I was sent to Winterville A place of ice and snow and chill A place of somber winter’s time With mountains that I could not climb Where winter sun had small exist And summer light had no desist Where metal was no friend to skin And one mistake could do you in. Where hibernation was the fare And tunnels lead to everywhere. Where thoughts of home was just a theme And visiting was in a dream. But now I sit a tropic shore To warm these bones forever more. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I think the tropic shore much more appealing... doesn't sound as if you are having any problems staying warm SY... I enjoyed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart there is always a joy and a certain frisson of anticipation when I read your wonderful poems. You combine exquisite skill with perfect flow do I love this, you have to know I really do. Outstandingly well written and beautifully constructed this is absolutely fabulous I love it utterly utterly utterly In dreams I float where sighs are sweet To places where true hearts can meet Soft whispers speak of loving care And love lives on forever there Time has no meaning in that place There is no hurry, no cause to race All that is, is, it doesn’t fade away It lasts forever until the close of play Days never end there is no night Hearts live bathed in salvation’s light The softest breeze carries love’s touch Perfumed with delight of such In dreams I go to float forever more Carried by the poetry of your sigh Seymour   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But now I sit a tropic shore To warm these bones forever more. ============================== and we walk hand in hand upon your beaches of understand. ~~ thank you for the warm of your words Sy-babes     |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
As you warm all of us with your wonderful poetry. Thanking you, Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair No problems physically. LOL Marsha So nice to have your comments again. Take care and thank you. JM, Always a delight to see your comments. I hope all is well, I told Randy to take care of you while he is there. LOL Some how I miss you? WWS |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My little space of our "tropical shore" here in Florida is kinda chilly today. What about your space. But, still, it's LOTS warmer than where all that snow is. I'd love to see the snow, but not all that cold that goes along with it. I'll just watch it through the eyes of the fine poets here, won't you? Thanks for sharing your warmth with us today, Mr. Seymour. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat Thank you for the warm reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl It is my pleasure and it is lovely today. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The tropic shore sounds like the place to be Sey, especially when it is soooooo cold here. Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely warm words on this cold winter's day. Enjoyed the read Sy. ~Warm morning hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Took me a while to get here, but here I am. Enchantress Perhaps a hot cup of tea. Hugs back. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, enjoyed this write...particularly the last lines...it's freezing cold here today and it's good to know that you are enjoying the warm tropical shore... believe in what your heart feels... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Needed this after reading A cool poem made me feel all warm again ty, Very nicely done  enjoyed reading it much |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio It's an at last sort of thing but I do enjoy, thank you. whiskey Glad it warmed you up. Thanks for the read and reply. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A tropic shore - sounds wonderful to me!!! Cor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne I hope the drop by warned you up. Thank you dear for the read and warm reply. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy The palm trees line up in front of sun and behind it after day is done from my warm to yours  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you sweet. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (12-06-2002 01:24 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morni---whoops! How time flies! I should be saying, "Good afternoon, Mr. T.! If you would still like to see the snow, but just don't like the cold, you could come up here and I shall put my arms around you and show you some spledorous things! No, on second thought, I think it would be safer for me if you were to just languish on the sunny beaches of Florida with your lovely wife Isabelle. Oh, well! See you in my dreams! tehe EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel That would be a wonderful place to meet you. LOL Have a delightful day. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, always think of those tropical shores and let the thoughts of your loved ones keep you warm deep inside your heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you I thought this one had gone through the black hole. LOL |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Well what can I say? Whatever it was it wouldn't do justice to your poem. But it was truly beautiful. Laugh often, love much, live well. WinterWren |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WinterWren Thank you for the delightful comment. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Care to share some of that warm shore, Sy? I could sure use it...brrrrr!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise Would you like a can of sunshine? Thank you hon for the read and reply. |
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