Here on Earth with me....Are you there? (LIW's Challenge)

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-12-05 06:24 PM

Among the stars of gleam, glimmer and twink
There my love.....yet...as each sun rises upon
each moon’s set...you, my love, you....
are here with me..

The rivers of the earth will dry, the skies will
cloud with the dust of our earth, the rains
shall dampen the parched ground, filling
the cracks with mud....here, in this place
with me... As you are there above the
sun in silent shimmer, my star.

I kiss the rays upon the oceans as each swell
brings you near....yet never here with me....

Yes, there....above Orion, before the Milky Way..
my guiding light is there.....even as you are here
in my mind.....dreaming with me...

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-12-05 06:29 PM

Barry

You took this past the stars into forever. So romantic you are!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-12-05 06:31 PM

Oh such huge sighs coming from Canada once again tonight Barry!
You met this challenge very well indeed.
~Hugs & Sighs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-12-05 06:33 PM

ahhhhh...you write so eloquently.

M

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-12-05 07:39 PM

"...above the sun in silent shimmer,
my star..."

It just does not get prettier than that. This is a lovely poem, challenge or not. Enjoyed a great deal. And re-read for the joy of it.

Warmest regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-12-05 08:45 PM

(smiles) Oh Barry, this is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, such starlight fills your words as always, yay, this is a swooner, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

6 posted 2002-12-05 08:57 PM

Such a swoon to the tune
of the songs of the moon,
your poetic whelm is very precious
the romance of stars is quite infectious
so please dear Barry please
pen another, cure my disease

I just love your romantic writes..

Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-12-05 09:03 PM

nice

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

8 posted 2002-12-08 06:41 AM

Just beyond reach, yet somewhere inside--a sigh in dreams flight!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-12-08 08:47 AM

Lady will so enjoy your clever twist with her theme...you are there, here with me...well done, Barry, well done!

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