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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Trail along A blossom here Wind along Another there Petal soft And fragile fair Are special moments That we share Climb along This fence and gate Sing a song Oh patient wait Weave a pattern On life's quilt Of love and strength Of absent guilt We creep along So intertwined Upon the blossoms Of lifetime Trail along~ When time is through Have you done All you can do? ~Sunkissed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice, sweet and light |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I just love this, sweet friend, such sunshine always fills your words, I wish this warmth to always glimmer deep in your soul around the prirose path to your dreams, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
I liked this one; your message came across fluently and smoothly... and I'm sure it'll make people think!  The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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