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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-12-04 10:14 PM

This restless heart that surfs the avalanche of overwhelm
Geese ribbons fly just overhead, and spirit takes the helm
Impatient as the day that I was born, and never rested since
And make my way on snow-blind faith despite a frightened wince

While some may say as sight unseen a dream prevails in dust
Formations drive in lacy thrive and follow through I must
And as the day may take away another few coins from the pot
This restless heart burns hotter still to steel the rumbling lot

All in good time that which is mine will stand in flicker free
Geese ribbons fly about the sky in haunting call to me
As I should go my life will flow without my want or will
This restless heart will not depart of what will drive me still

Copyright Kkh 12/5/02

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-12-04 10:26 PM

Kkh....a well thought out flurb for the
evening...seems you captured it beautifully!
Well done, Kathy...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-12-04 10:36 PM

Expertly penned Kathleen.
So very much enjoyed...
Thank you for this keeper.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-12-04 10:51 PM

"Geese ribbons fly about the sky in haunting call to me..."

I picture, as well as feel, your words...

There's no doubt about it, you are a very talented poetess!

EA

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-12-05 08:31 AM

I so enjoy your poetry. I liked these phrases:

"avalanche of overwhelm"

"geese ribbons fly"

"snow-blind faith"

This is a beautiful poem.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-12-05 08:54 AM

ThisDiamond
My sympathy, very well done excellent write.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-12-05 10:13 AM

"And make my way on snow-blind faith despite a frightened wince"

This, sweet Kathleen, is what really stood out to me.
Faith is what makes us keep holding on, no matter what may come or go.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-05-2002 10:14 AM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-12-05 10:34 AM

ThisDiamond~
This is simply lovely~

I found many beauties in visiting your web sites~
Thanking you for the share~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-12-05 09:11 PM

enjoy your read

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-12-05 09:27 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! And may you always follow your destiny, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is a special poem of faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-12-06 08:28 PM

ThisDiamond - your words are as lovely as the ribbon that graces your hair...

BC

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