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In Time I'll Love Again
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In Time I'll Love Again |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Alan Ayers * * * * You left me brokenhearted In the ruins of our love So desperate was I for answers As I searched the skies above My love for you had blossomed And you promised me you'd stay Now my heart lays torn and tattered Since the day you went away Your arms now held another And my love was pushed aside You cared little for my feelings And didn't care how much I cried I sit here in my sorrow As the rain falls down the pane I will not let love defeat me For in time I'll love again * * * I should point out that this is purely fiction and not written about me or anyone else I know. I am in motion |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue... You do write romance so well.  ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pictorally and poetically perfect! ~ It eased my heart to learn 'twas fiction! ~ hugs Linda |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Sad to read, but it does end on a hopeful note and knowing it is all from your imagination helps! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I'm so happy this is just fictional to you, sweet friend, yet I couldn't help but cry reading this as I know others in the nworld who feel this way and my heart goes out to them all and hope they can find the heart to know they will find true love again! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sue~ This is so beautifully penned. I truly enjoyed reading this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue~ Thanks for the " Warning Label " I was worried there for awhile. Enjoyed very much, thanks for sharing...Paul Did you get to see the eclipse a couple of days ago in your beautiful country? I heard about it on the news. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, but so sad. It says perfectly what someone in this situation would think, I'm sure. I'm glad that it's not about you, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It happens all the time...glad its not happening to you...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so very much for your replies. Paul - The solar eclipse was seen over in the South of Australia which is about 800 kms from where I live in Melbourne. I did see it on the news and it looked absolutely awesome. I heard that the next one in ten years time will be in northern Queensland. I did actually see one though back in the seventies and I must say it was such an eerie experience yet so fascinating. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue, Such feelings of sorrow in this poem; however, I was encouraged by the last lines. So nicely written. '... I will not let love defeat me For in time I'll love again ...' I heard on the news today that you still have no rain and the drought is becoming very severe. Darn, I hope it's not affecting your beautiful gardens. I'll see if Earth Angel and I can conjure up some rain for you. Hugs, Marti |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marti You're not going to believe this but yesterday and throughout last night we had the heaviest downpour of rain which was so long overdue. We have been praying for rain for months and now I'm wondering if you may have done a rain dance and caused all of this beautiful rain. My garden hasn't faired too badly considering the dry conditions and the water restrictions and it is so fresh and alive this morning since the rain. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hi Suetang - lovely and wistful. Cor |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - no matter whom or what it is written about, it is a sad lovely poem.. BC |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful romantic poem. You do indeed write beautiful poems of romance. |
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Elimeno P Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 17The only place I want to be! |
As in accordance with the footnote, sympathies are not offered! I enjoyed reading this...it was familiarly rhythmic (goes nicely with the picture, too!). EP |
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