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Open Poetry #23

Special Gift

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-12-04 08:42 PM

In the candle light of the season
That will hold the warmth
Of your exquisite presence
My devotion to you is complete

My love for you
Will never flicker
But grow brighter with time
In an internal flame of devotion

The wick is lit in the faith
That we shall share things together
With every season greeting
Bringing us so much closer together
In a lifetime commitment

In the pedals of affection around it
The fragrance of our special friendship
Will blossom in cuddling motions
Of soft caresses saying it all
Honey let us set fire to this evening
And create our own special gift

D.Lester Young 12/4/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (12-04-2002 08:43 PM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-12-05 03:16 PM

D. Lester,
this is a fragrant write a sort of wake up and smell the roses type of piece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Drifter
New Member

since 2002-11-27

Posts 9
Arkansas, U.S.

2 posted 2002-12-05 03:33 PM

You are a very polished writer worthy both praise and merit from your inspiration; who or whatever it might be. You have captured the essence of a special connection and displayed it beautifuly through a montage of words.

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