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Forever Knight
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Forever Knight |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas 
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You reached me in your thoughts the knight of my dreams approached me in the moonlight whispered touch caressing me. Walked with me in the dark until the sun started to smile assured me of your return a promised kept worth while I patiently awaited now we sit in mutual lust I give you my gift of passion evening spent..not long enough a symbol of your reality you hand me a golden rose I prick my finger with the thorn a trace of blood ... flows until the sun is hidden and the moon shares it light I wait for your return my dream " forever knight" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Salty Very romantic, enjoyed the read. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice, romantic sensual I enjoyed it much  |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Thank you Seymour Tabin....as I like yours very much today also. Such simalarity walking in our thoughts today. ------------------------------------ Thank you for your kind words whiskey *S* In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
What attracted me to this poem was the medievil theme of the title. And while reading this, I could picture the events between a knight in shining armor and his fair maiden. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An appealing touch of Renaissance romance adds to this tender poem of love. EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautfully and sensually penned Salty. Much enjoyed the read! ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well done...and I should have known you would be a lady from the Tejas state... Very nice poem Salty... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so nice to see your words and your smile, Salty...and a beautiful one at that..it must run in your family hugss Maureen |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Salty, this is really beautiful. I can tell that you aren't new at this. You have a lot of talent, lady. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PIP.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Where do I fill out the application?  (my armor is only slightly tarnished  )In all seriousness, Salty, you have done very well with this one. There's something about medeival times with their castles, Lords, ladies and knights that can make romanticism flow from one's pen....as you have done here.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastically romantic...James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Salty~ I enjoyed this very much. Such a beautifully penned and romantic piece. Very nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Schweeeeeeeeeet dreams! Enjoyed! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Don't let that black knight Balladeer fool ya....ya just turned him on with your picture and those words ya used like passion and thorn and blood and all that....he's really a "love 'em and leave 'em type a guy...honestly....Ya need Sir Toerag....I'm so much better than all those wanna be knights.....Sir Galahad?....(Wuss)...(he sat around that round table so much, he gained a hundred and twenty pounds in one year and changed his name to Balladeer).....And as a lover?....Toerag's the best....Don Juan?....I hear he's gay now....actually the best lover was that other guy...I think they called him "Came-alot"......but he's dead ya know... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Oh, and one more thing.....I have this food fetish....I just love the taste of salt on my tongue.....I know it's bad for your blood pressure and all that....but your picture kinda makes it rise too yanno? |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Thank you Opeth, Your right there is something intriguing about Medieveil times. -------------------------------------- Earth Angel Thank you for such kind words and thank you stopping in to read me. -------------------------------------- Enchantress, Thank you for stopping in and leaving such nice words. --------------------------- Magnus I see you are a southerner yourself ...I finally figured out how to look. *S* --------------------------------- nakdthoughts What a very nice thing to say Maureen.. You are as lovely as your writings...Thank you. ------------------------------------- garysgirl Thank you gg as I look forward to reading yours also. ------------------------------------- Balladeer Is that you on that horse? I have some stuff that will polish that thing right up. btw: Thank you -------------------------------------- James Michael...Thank you ever so much ---------------------------------------- Such sweet words Vicky. Thank you ----------------------------------- Sandpiper RIght back at ya *S* Thank you for stopping in. ------------------------------------- Toerag You make me laugh big time...are you sure Don Jauns gay and Camelots dead??? I'll have to cross them off my list. Hey but Jaun and I are going shopping anyway. All these wanna be knights running around here can drive a person crazy...ya know?  |
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