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Open Poetry #23

Soaked in Thought

someonespecial
Junior Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 10

0 posted 2002-10-16 03:20 PM

Dampened by weather,
resting amongst the candles' glow,
a warm heart waits for words
accompanied by memories
scented a tempting vanilla...
the cool air steaming,
clouded with desire
as she anticipates him,
and prepares, leans back
closes eyes and lays plans,
bracing herself for the familiar
fixed rhythm of his footsteps...

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-10-16 03:22 PM

Very nice! A wonderful little write. Soft and tender of word. Enjoyed

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2002-10-16 03:48 PM

Quietly done.....and refreshing.....but then, I'm an Oregonian. Bob

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2002-10-16 05:32 PM

ah anticipation, so often sweeter than the deed.

nice bit.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-16 07:44 PM

(sigh) This is a beautifully soft and tender write, sweet friend, I love it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-16 07:47 PM

I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing with us.

Love To All,
Ethel,
Garysgirl

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