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Duet with Sunshine.
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Duet with Sunshine. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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I was reminded just that other day, perhaps it was in my childhood, that time should and does flow for the youth, frequenting in a tenured bliss. I, however, did not bode well for time, for it left little tender bliss that I might consider…… Remembering … my childish whim thrown to the flickering ember of my 13th candle. …its charred husk, as molten snow crumbles, On the cracks of wept wax The past bleeding true. Recall it… “The ICE AGE” Often glacial in memento, etched along the loom of Antarctic caps…… An Imposition of brilliant blank amnesiac white I am still lost, here in the mist of a now and only my shell shows age... and my jaded eyes, the weight of experience and yet I feel No more than a fragmentary photographic negative….. Yet I feel my spirit, my soul, they somehow grow younger as I mellow with you. El riesgo vive siempre! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-16-2002 08:48 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
And a lovely duet it is. Splendid, Enjoyed.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yet I feel my spirit, my soul, they somehow grow younger as I mellow with you. ------------------------------------------ Karilea and Brian... THIS is wonderful!! A fantastic duet from two of PiP's finest. Very very nicely done. ~Hugs to you both~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and a smile appears......  This is so very well written and just astounding in beauty and wisdom. Loved it.If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian and Karilea Very nicely done...time and change a subject not easy to tackle..but one of my favorites. Enjoyed you two!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Oh, you two make a terrific duo, sweet friends, time and change are indeed two completely abstract concepts that are hard to describe in the ways of the word yet you two have done so well! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Brian and Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bravo you two for this awesome write!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very Nice... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brian and Karilea, I loved this duet. thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Brinniant writing, you two!!! I know both of your styles and still had trouble trying to distinuish who wrote what...you bend together very well and it's a beautiful piece.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, it was wonderful that you put out the call to duet...thank you for allowing me to work with you on this. It still amazes me that here, we may reach across our world, touch words, and sing songs... thank you! And thanks to everyone who came by to read, and enjoy this with us! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, and I am delighted that you agreed to do this duet with me. Thank you giving me the opportunity to write with you. Until the next dance. A huge thanks to everyone for their generous replies. El riesgo vive siempre! |
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