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rm711
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2002-12-02 04:31 PM


Sitting here
And feeling grey
Like it’s my fault
I don’t think so

Because that’s not me
I’m smiling for eternity

Dark, dark days
Have passed before
I can see further
So everything is clearer
And beyond the hate
Is the stairway and the sun
Tomorrows glorious light

Passed to me
As part of your games
So many hurtful words
Makes your ego swell
But mine dies

Laugh in my face
I laugh back
You’re confused
Annoyed you can’t brake me

I have something you’ll never know
I way out of sorrow
Through this whirlwind of hate
You have forced me to create
A place in my mind
Where I can leave you behind

One day you will smile too
And regret what you do
In the meantime
If you don’t mind

I will have the time of my life.

Rosie Mitchell

© Copyright 2002 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
1 posted 2002-12-02 04:37 PM


Yet another great poem dear sweet Rosie - I wasn't lying when I said you had talent; stick at it though; never give up writing - it makes me feel good and I know it makes a lot of others feel good too .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

rm711
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 131
Wiltshire, England
2 posted 2002-12-05 10:43 AM


I only wish I had talent!
Thanks for kind reply though
Im havin the time of my life hehehe...

Rosie Mitchell

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