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rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2002-12-02 12:26 PM

Where are you?
I could scream
But you’d never hear
Because you’ve probably
Forgotten who I am

Although I could never forget you
Your smile wasn’t an everyday
It was pure majesty
Who could forget that?
Never forget a word you said

You made me get up
Even on the coldest of days
When it wasn’t just the rain pouring
It was my tears
But you made me laugh until it was gone

But really it won’t be gone
Not until you return
And I know it’s unlikely
But I can wish all I want
Then when the pains gone
I’ll look up and smile.

Rosie Mitchell

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2002-12-02 12:56 PM

So smile ... The pain can't last forever so why wait ? - let it drift away today . Another beautiful poem, I said that I hadn't heard enough of the kind of poetry your writing for a long time - I don't take it back; this just reminds me further why I love it so .
Lovely, truly lovely .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

2 posted 2002-12-02 01:00 PM

A smile helps u through the roughest times, so always remember to smile

A beautiful poem

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-12-02 07:08 PM

Enjoyed...find new things to smile about...more constant things...like family and friends...James

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2002-12-02 11:32 PM

When Im surrounded by so many great poems I find it hard to say something different about each one. And to put well in words how good they really are. But be asured yours was very good.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

5 posted 2002-12-03 09:39 AM

Being an outsider, I try not to cry but, will say that you write very well. Thank you.

etoodog

rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

6 posted 2002-12-05 10:47 AM

The day after I wrote this the person I was writing about turned up in my life again & it kinda woke me up, I don't need him, I never did.

Thankyou 4 replying

Rosie Mitchell

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