Open Poetry #23 |
red wine |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
red wine pours from the sky, filling in theblack outlines along the forsaken trees, as nightfall comes down slowly color by color breaking the spell of sleep cast on this monochromatic day |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Wow, oh my gosh, I just love the colors you put in your words, sweet friend, I love gazing upon red and orange sunsets and sunrises and watching the embers burn upon the horizons surrounding it! (big huggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i'm more of a sunset person myself, but this sounds beautiful...the first fingers of light flooding out onto the world. great pictures you've given it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown [This message has been edited by Ethan Halo (12-01-2002 09:12 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sounds a bit like a day....tattooed. Think so, Marie? Ed |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pretty write, even in it's display. The colors of the mind are magnificent. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful. Your words paint such a lovely picture in my mind's eye. I love sunsets and sunrises both. They are so beautiful. I've got lots of them on my computer's screensavers. Thank you for sharing this beautiful picture. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-01-2002 09:55 PM).] |
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