Open Poetry #23 |
"first fruits" |
coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"first fruits" she reeks of sultry needs the rainy cane and jasmine from spicy scented islands where fragile fragrant blossoms unfold their first fruits wanton whispers quietly quicken anticipation as her hands draw me down into the moonglow of uncharted paradise [This message has been edited by coyote (12-02-2002 12:02 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Enchanting. This needs to go in my library. Never be normal! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This definitely worked for me!!! EA |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Wind, Thanks for reading. I made some tweaks, as usual, lol. Earth Angel, Thanks for the read. Glad you like my work, which it seems is always "in progress". yours, coyote "The greatest of all faults is to be conscious of none." |
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