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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-11-30 06:47 PM



Voices Of Heat

You have a voice that caresses my ear
That strokes my soul with heat I hear
Your liquid fire just drips through me
Urging me to behave quite sinfully
If I cede to the heat as I know I will
Far into the night it will hold me still
I know that from this I’ll never be free
The urge to sin will flare constantly

Your voice pours forth honeyed charm
Which soothes my soul in oceans of calm
And although I try hard to resist the sin
That beckons me to come on in
I know I’ll succumb to the lure of this
The heated moments of poetic bliss
Then when I’m covered by your heat
I’ll respond again to its impassioned beat

Your voice speaks enchantment’s spell
It touches my soul too much and well
Then while I am bespelled like this
I can feel again the magic of poet’s kiss
Wrapping my soul in the need for heat
It saps my will and speeds heart’s beat
I’ll sinker deeper into the wish for such
That is conjured by your voices touch

Stroke your voice through my mind again
Let me revel once more in its honeyed flame

Marsha

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-30 06:56 PM




(sigh) Oh Marsha, this is pure honey in poetry, sweet friend, I wish for this gentle passion to always sing to your golden heart! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-11-30 07:20 PM



Now here is our Marsha, all kinds of fire
trapped in heat, and honeyed desire...
for poets who pen the heart of bliss
treat her well poets, for she treats us like this!

The Crimson Knight
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3 posted 2002-11-30 07:52 PM


When speaking passions flames your talking my language
This is a burning passion poem and I loved it

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-11-30 10:46 PM


you've got this impassioned write..penned so well, well done my friend...the fire's air flares this far

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-30-2002 10:47 PM).]

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5 posted 2002-12-01 12:13 PM


Greatly enjoyed this one, loved the last two lines!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

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6 posted 2002-12-01 01:16 AM


Marsha, you're burning up the page with this one.
Enjoy every heated moment.

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7 posted 2002-12-01 09:36 AM


the magic of poet’s kiss..and your words
always touch me
hugsssss
M

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8 posted 2002-12-01 09:39 AM


Marsha this is just awesome and full of feeling.  Enjoyed thoroughly!
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9 posted 2002-12-01 09:58 AM


enjoyed
garysgirl
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10 posted 2002-12-01 10:06 AM


"Stroke your voice through my mind again
Let me revel once more in its honeyed flame"


  


The whole poem is beautiful, but this verse especially stood out to me.





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~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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