Open Poetry #23 |
Voices Of Heat |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Voices Of Heat You have a voice that caresses my ear That strokes my soul with heat I hear Your liquid fire just drips through me Urging me to behave quite sinfully If I cede to the heat as I know I will Far into the night it will hold me still I know that from this I’ll never be free The urge to sin will flare constantly Your voice pours forth honeyed charm Which soothes my soul in oceans of calm And although I try hard to resist the sin That beckons me to come on in I know I’ll succumb to the lure of this The heated moments of poetic bliss Then when I’m covered by your heat I’ll respond again to its impassioned beat Your voice speaks enchantment’s spell It touches my soul too much and well Then while I am bespelled like this I can feel again the magic of poet’s kiss Wrapping my soul in the need for heat It saps my will and speeds heart’s beat I’ll sinker deeper into the wish for such That is conjured by your voices touch Stroke your voice through my mind again Let me revel once more in its honeyed flame Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Marsha, this is pure honey in poetry, sweet friend, I wish for this gentle passion to always sing to your golden heart! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now here is our Marsha, all kinds of fire trapped in heat, and honeyed desire... for poets who pen the heart of bliss treat her well poets, for she treats us like this! |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
When speaking passions flames your talking my language This is a burning passion poem and I loved it |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
you've got this impassioned write..penned so well, well done my friend...the fire's air flares this far [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-30-2002 10:47 PM).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Greatly enjoyed this one, loved the last two lines! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Marsha, you're burning up the page with this one. Enjoy every heated moment. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the magic of poet’s kiss..and your words always touch me hugsssss M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marsha this is just awesome and full of feeling. Enjoyed thoroughly! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"Stroke your voice through my mind again Let me revel once more in its honeyed flame" The whole poem is beautiful, but this verse especially stood out to me. "Love makes the world go around" |
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