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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
re-light mid ash grey coals an ember glows awaiting chance new flames will dance to warm my days in heated ways with breath of air my lady fair can set alight my fuel tonight and fresh desire will feed my fire © 11/29/02 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sir... this comes across in several ways, but the very best way is to hear it as a faint chant of heart... to match the drumbeat within... very good. Enjoyed this, thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may you and your lady fair spend such true happiness together forever and ever! (sigh) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sounds of a man in love... music to any ear. ThisDiamond |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
A romantic and energetic poem  Never be normal! |
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She Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 41Wishing On A Northern Star |
Lovely writing you have here. Sensual with a good face.  "You put a stain on all of my good days." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
stir the fire phoenix |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very lovely indeed could hear the whisper of your heart calling to your lady |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I guess it could happen...fresh desire, hmmmm...maybe that's what i need |
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