Open Poetry #23 |
Dried Mums |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Dried Mums they sit knee-deep in water yet zapped of energy of power to gain any life from the depths of nourishment given no longer can they draw in the sustenance of living they simply await their crumbling, they're becoming a different piece of the universe, as time claims them ©November 30, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (11-30-2002 01:42 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Good one, enjoyed the read. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Yes, I liked this poetry, it is undescribable. I want to say "down to Earth," but it just doesn't fit. It is interesting and definately not like most poetry I have read Never be normal! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is undescribingly wonderful, sweet friend, I love how you express with such sincerity to the limit, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Virginia, I love the way you write poetry. It's very interesting to read. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Virginia, The subjects you select are always so reflective of your own unique and enjoyable style of writing. A pleasure to read. ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent, Virginia. You zapped the zip right into this one... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoy seeing the world around you through your eyes! --I have my days when I feel more like a Mum than a Mom! tehe EA |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You know, I have three flowers sitting in an old beer bottle in water... I've had them there for about three weeks. I've watched them go from brilliant blooms to wilting, flowers, as time claims them. *smiles* thanks for the read. No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot. |
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