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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-11-30 10:22 AM

My Salt

you are my salt
my season to life
but then,
most everyone says
that too much salt’s
not good for me

©November 30, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-11-30 10:31 AM

C-L-E-V-E-R ! ---and they're right! Too much salt is not good for you!

Enjoyed this briny bit!

EA

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-11-30 10:33 AM

Thanks, EA, it is a briny bit at that. It's about no one, but just came to me. Maybe it's a poem for someone who believes another person is the salt of their life.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-11-30 01:05 PM

This made me grin; clever and wise!

Love your poetry

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Jamie Dawg
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 35

4 posted 2002-11-30 01:09 PM

clever and dry wit being exhibited. Aren't there just people who make things interesting and yet can be quite troublesome at the same time? (!)

enjoyed this very much.
JD xx

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-30 07:32 PM

(giggles in delight) And after eating salt you need a lot of water to wash it down, a balance of salt and sugar intake makes up the perfect devotion! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-11-30 07:40 PM

Virginia, this is cute. I'm sure glad that my "love" is
made of mostly sugar and not much salt. Of course "they" also
say that too much sugar is not good for you.
Soooo.......what do we do??

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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