Open Poetry #23 |
YOU |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
~YOU~ are my dreams come true, the man I've always dreamed of ~YOU~ are like the brightest star, with love shining brilliantly ~YOU~ are like a gentle breeze whispering words of love softly ~YOU~ are like a light rain with your gentle loving touch ~YOU~ have love as a strong tree, with deep anchored roots ~YOU~ show love as beautiful as magnificent poetry, gracefully written ~YOU~ are romantic as a sweet love song, quietly soothing ~YOU~ and our love will be lasting always, for forever and a day |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
Such sweet words to speak of someone. Lucky in love |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
How lovely! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
This very romantice... And sensitive words from sensitive person like you.. I really love it.. Keep writting.. Hugesss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, niveah5, for reading and for your kind reply. It's much appreciated. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Kethry. I appreciate your reading and replying to my poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Secretlife, thank you for reading and replying. I'm really glad that you like my poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"YOU"--who me? tehe No, I do believe you are so eloquently and lovingly referring to your beloved Gary! He sounds divine! You are so fortunate!--the both of you are! ~ morning hugs Linda |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
YOU are great! you are the best! good job Ethel, keep em comming Never be normal! [This message has been edited by Wind (11-30-2002 10:20 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, yep, you got it right! But, YOU are real special, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Liz. You're real sweet. ~hugs~ "Love makes the world go around" |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... ~YOU~ and our love will be lasting always, for forever and a day ...' And may this be forever true. Huggles, Marti 'Don't give up. Moses was once a basket case...' |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this brought a tear to my eye as it made me think of my Joanna and how she means everything to me and to have her would be heaven to my heart! (kiss on cheek) I wish you and Gary such heavenly happiness forever, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-30-2002 05:38 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Marti. I really appreciate your replies. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Noah, for your sweet replies. I hope that youi and Joanna will have a very happy life together, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful, romantic poem. You are so lucky to have someone like that. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, thank you so much. Yeah, Gary and I both feel very, very blessed to have each other. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate you replying to it, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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