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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-11-30 02:46 AM


~YOU~
are my dreams
come true,
the man I've
always dreamed of

~YOU~
are like the
brightest star,
with love shining
brilliantly

~YOU~
are like a
gentle breeze
whispering words
of love softly

~YOU~
are like a
light rain
with your gentle
loving touch

~YOU~
have love as a
strong tree,
with deep
anchored roots

~YOU~
show love as
beautiful as
magnificent poetry,
gracefully written

~YOU~
are romantic
as a sweet love
song, quietly
soothing

~YOU~
and our love
will be lasting
always, for
forever and a day



© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
neveah5
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1 posted 2002-11-30 03:46 AM


Such sweet words to speak of someone. Lucky in love
Kethry
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2 posted 2002-11-30 04:18 AM


How lovely!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



secretlife
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3 posted 2002-11-30 06:53 AM


This very romantice... And sensitive words from sensitive person like you..
I really love it..
Keep writting..

Hugesss

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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4 posted 2002-11-30 08:53 AM


Thank you, niveah5, for reading and for
your kind reply. It's much appreciated.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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5 posted 2002-11-30 08:55 AM


Thank you, Kethry.
I appreciate your reading and replying
to my poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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6 posted 2002-11-30 08:59 AM


Secretlife, thank you for reading and replying.
I'm really glad that you like my poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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7 posted 2002-11-30 10:11 AM


"YOU"--who me? tehe No, I do believe you are so eloquently and lovingly referring to your beloved Gary! He sounds divine! You are so fortunate!--the both of you are!

~ morning hugs

Linda

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8 posted 2002-11-30 10:19 AM


YOU

are great!
you are the best!


good job Ethel, keep em comming


Never be normal!

[This message has been edited by Wind (11-30-2002 10:20 AM).]

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9 posted 2002-11-30 10:59 AM


Linda, yep, you got it right!  
But,  YOU   are real special, too.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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10 posted 2002-11-30 11:00 AM


Thank you, Liz.
You're real sweet.
~hugs~

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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11 posted 2002-11-30 05:35 PM


'... ~YOU~
and our love
will be lasting
always, for
forever and a day ...'

And may this be forever true.

Huggles, Marti

'Don't give up. Moses was once a basket case...'
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12 posted 2002-11-30 05:38 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this brought a tear to my eye as it made me think of my Joanna and how she means everything to me and to have her would be heaven to my heart! (kiss on cheek) I wish you and Gary such heavenly happiness forever, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 2002-11-30 05:51 PM


Thank you, Marti.
I really appreciate your replies.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

garysgirl
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14 posted 2002-11-30 05:53 PM


        
Thank you, Noah, for your sweet replies. I hope that youi and Joanna will have a very happy life together, too.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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15 posted 2002-11-30 06:32 PM


This is a beautiful, romantic poem. You are so lucky to have someone like that.
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16 posted 2002-11-30 06:35 PM


nice
garysgirl
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17 posted 2002-11-30 07:00 PM


Sue, thank you so much. Yeah, Gary and I both feel
very, very blessed to have each other.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

garysgirl
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18 posted 2002-11-30 07:02 PM


Vandana, thank you for reading my poem.
I appreciate you replying to it, too.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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