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Refusing You Both (dedicated) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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You yes you The door is closed again and through it the muffled sounds of my words will still be heard. They are being choked and the fingers of threats make loud bruises around their necks but the clamoring of those who want to know the stories will always be heard over the thunder of silence; and bruises heal. What will you think of next? Shall I abandon my soul, Dear Poet to suit the too decadent lies that you whisper to yourself when the pain and truth, like abused animals, come to sink their fangs into your heart? Pity you? I wouldn't dare. Understand how you feel? I didn't know you could. My words will always be formidable. My passion will always defeat your hatred. The infection of my adoration in places you refused to go will make me loved. You won't destroy my words. You cannot deny the story and you will never silence my pen. The story will continue and since you aren't God it isn't your place to reveal the characters. ~~I Love You~~ |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
"You won't destroy my words. You cannot deny the story and you will never silence my pen." Just loved this !!!  |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Powerful write. Greatly enjoyed this read Temptress.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww you go woman !!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
After all the pen is mightier than the sword, especially in the hands of one who wields it with the grace and strength of spirit that you do Temptress. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, Jennifer...you go get 'em , Girl!! There is so much feeling and emotion felt in this poem. It's VERY powerful, friend. You keep getting it out, sweet friend....it's good for you!!  ~~hugs to you~~  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Whew! I sure hope this isn't for me! This is GOOD!  |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Sometimes throwing a temper tantrum is just the perfect thing. Standing up here, folks. Thanks for acknowledging, reading, and being here to read me. *Jenn* ~~I Love You~~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"when the pain and truth, like abused animals, come to sink their fangs into your heart?" When the Lady has the urge to vent...she does NOT mess around! Bravo, dear friend, I am sure your words have specific meaning to you yet they speak to me, also. What woman has not worn these shoes? Powerful read here ... you go girl! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"and since you aren't God it isn't your place to reveal the characters" Smiling at this line. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i enjoyed your words that poured through the wrath that hopefully just stays on the pen, tho i have thrown a pot or two of cold spaghetti at the beast, i try to keep it at that level, unless i write about it too.. |
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cherrylips Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 51UK |
Very powerful I felt as though I expereinced all you must have whilst writing this . Hope only I can live up to these expectations now I have joined this site. Check out my poem if you would like after all comments from one who can write like this are certainly worth while, cherry lipsx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YOU GO GIRL!! Jenn I love this!!! The words and emotions just pour out of you! Excellent write and an enjoyable read. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Really nice temptress, i enjoyed it alot; especially this part: "Shall I abandon my soul, Dear Poet to suit the too decadent lies that you whisper to yourself when the pain and truth, like abused animals, come to sink their fangs into your heart? " |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Wow!!! You go girl, he isn't God, so fight the power!!! (sigh) Never let anyone judge you but yourself, sweet friend, God Bless You, I send angel hugs of comfort to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I am so glad I don't make you angry.  |
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