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"TWENTY OR LESS...#93"
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"TWENTY OR LESS...#93" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"TWENTY OR LESS...#93" Copyright 2002 by: MARK V SHELDON She gulps her evening her darker living walks in time's filtered shadows sinking deeper the night grows cold "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic as always Mark! ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssss) Oh Mark, I sensed despair reading this, sweet friend, I hope this doesn't relate to one of your loved ones as I send angel hugs out to all your family and my Thanksgiving smiles today! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Nancy, as always, thank you for enjoying. Noah: no worries -- just abstract, open-ended images... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You certainly created a mood with these images and economy of words! You are very good at writing these! Earth Angel |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
** reads critique message ** hehe nice write ri Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Earth Angel, I just chip away at these sculptures and hope that I don't lop off a nose or an ear... Riley, sometimes it's all in the response...  -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
I close the curtain to the light in the darkness I am held tight |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I like the way you write these, Mark. You put so much meaning into so few words. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-29-2002 12:03 AM).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
HeLen: never close the curtain to the light -- the darkness is always there, anyway... Ethel, I'm pleased you enjoy these -- they're a lot of fun to concoct... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Mark... you sculpted this one quite well, leaving impressions and outlines but not defining the features for the reader... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
she sips the morning unaware darkness holds no fear blinding lights obscure |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ron, then may each reader fill in their own... Thank you for the thoughts. Kacy: I like the undercurrent of your reply. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Mark, best to beware of the hidden riptides. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Whoa! Superb images, lines. Like the filtered shadows of time! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Kacy: Agreed. Virginia: Thank you, but really, they're just triggers for the reader to fill in their own imagery, so this tells me that YOU have great imagery!  -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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