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Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2002-10-16 07:15 AM

I glanced at my wristwatch for the third time that minute.
What could be keeping her?
Something I'd said the night before?
Did I let something slip at the office?

And her eyes found me across the café.
Those eyes that danced into my mind,
Caught me, kept me for their own.

The waitress disappeared as Hannah passed;
Tables faded from my attention.
The café became a blur,
With Hannah the sharp focus at the center.
My pulse quickened, each beat bringing her closer.

A newly noticed music drew my ear.
I dared the question, "Do you dance?"
Her eyes flashed green challenging fire.
Maybe she'll dance tonight.
Either way, she'll surely keep me up.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2002-10-16 07:57 AM

Aren't you supposed to be studying?

Instead you grace us with some more of your good poetry... Works for me...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-10-16 08:11 AM

Well..seems you have begun to tell your own set of stories here... I enjoyed both and hope you continue the series... I for one am hooked now and need to know..what happens next, how does this evolve.

Good stuff here MI. If it took you all night as you remarked in the challenge thread..all I can say is it was well worth the effort!!!

Bravo!!!!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-10-16 12:32 PM

much better...

and, tapping toe over here...

I am WAITING..

This is indeed, a nice pair...um, the poems, you know...looking forward to seeing the rest...

now why do I do this? BAD FINGERS--BAD!!!

enjoyed.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

4 posted 2002-10-16 12:54 PM

Looks as though I may have missed the first part of this work.
I'll look for it. At any rate, I enjoyed the read and will
be watching for more ....

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-10-16 01:06 PM

A newly noticed music drew my ear.
I dared the question, "Do you dance?"
Her eyes flashed green challenging fire.
Maybe she'll dance tonight.
Either way, she'll surely keep me up.
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Ooooh myyyyy yessss!!
LOL@serenity's bad fingers.
I'm enjoying these...more please?
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

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