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reply to instant muse challenge: revelring |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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In the cavern of revelry the handmaids knead the bags of pipe. A tavern of an offering-- a boast of spring in this desert...dry. Let me wipe the dust from you-- I beckon you to do the same... Let me turn my back to you and swear I won't be stabbed again. buttons edge themselves undone buttons hanging on a thread following a path of sun following my own footstep. In the cavern of revelry the handmaids knead the bags of pipe... I will take just what I need-- I will sing along with strife. I will be the bellow's blow. I am that part of you-- let go In the cave of handmaids knead-- I turn and pray that I might sleep...tonight. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am that part of you-- let go I like that offer to knead~ *s* You are delightful to read serenity blaze~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I will be the bellow's blow. I am that part of you-- let go great phrase... did you get any sleep? I wonder sometimes. I remember the days of walking around like a Zombie... sure glad those days are over, or at least for now. *s Have a wonderful day Karen hugssss M |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is a song, yanno? Hmmm, Hymn? Ed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, you would win hands down in a duel of wits  Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
buttons edge themselves undone buttons hanging on a thread following a path of sun following my own footstep. ~*~ dangdangdangdangdang |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
buttons edge themselves undone **************** LOL, mine do that too! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity Sometimes I trip over you and wonder, how did I miss this before, it (she) is so remarkable? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And you will not only sing, you will bow before a huge audience offering the waves of standing ovations to the charisma you possess! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Blues? (still refuse to call you BS) I thank you kindly...you are just a delight. Period. M? No ma'am. I hadn't slept. I did the tylenol p.m. thing (can't believe how much money I've wasted on other things trying to sleep) but thank you lady, for popping in on the zombie poet? laughing. With hugs. Ed? It's true, sometimes I sing as I write, and I know, I've been threatening to record that nonsense for you (and a friend..*wink*) hmmm...who knows? Thanks with hugs for m'yeti. Keth? dunno about that one, but I appreciate the vote of confidence. Hugs to you too lady. Maybe next time you are just three hours away, I can come to the party. um, assuming I AM invited...  thanks you. Kari? Those buttons? It must be psychokinesis or something! *winks-n-hugs* Kace? My buttons are doing that in all the wrong places today! *frown* Thanks for reading lady! Martie--chuckling wickedly...I have been tripped over before. During my lost weekend days of course! (of course...) I'll have to tell ya that story sometime..heh. Maybe not. Hugs to MY FRIEND. Sweet Noah..dunno what I'd do without your love and light. I thank you much with a kiss on the cheek. You are a wonder, m'friend. Thanks all. I'm off to put my kitchen back together. Toe tapping frown. Every year? I say never again...sigh, and *wink* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Let me wipe the dust from you-- I beckon you to do the same... Let me turn my back to you and swear I won't be stabbed again. Your writing always stops me in my tracks and makes me want to read it once more.....twice more..... Awesome. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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